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[change] Requests
This is not the place to list proposals and discuss about Good Articles and Very Good Articles. The place to talk about Good Articles and Very Good Articles.
When starting a new request, please put it at the top of the section of the current month
[change] Started in June 2008
[change] WrestleMania 22
I would like some opinions on the simplification I did.-- † ChristianMan16 19:20, 8 June 2008 (UTC)
[change] Scotland
I have done a major overhaul of the article. Could someone have a look and give some constructive criticism? Thanks ← κεηηε∂γ (talk) 09:35, 3 June 2008 (UTC)
- Edit- Heres the diff ← κεηηε∂γ (talk) 09:41, 3 June 2008 (UTC)
- Here is my "constructive criticism:" The article has good length, it has improved very much by you, but my one problem is that it has so many red links. GA's should have few, to none of them. But very good job on the article, I will add it to our Wikiproject GA's. Also, next time, put this proposal at the very top. Cheers -- ✰AmericanEagle 16:58, 3 June 2008 (UTC)
- Also, more references are needed. -- ✰AmericanEagle 20:04, 3 June 2008 (UTC)
[change] Started in May 2008
[change] John Piper (theologian)
I've been creating the Red Links for this one for awhile. As well as other work, but now I'm listing it. -- AmericanEagle 06:33, 17 May 2008 (UTC)
[change] Bill Gothard
I just finished working on this article, and I'm sure it needs work, but that's what you're for! -- AmericanEagle 05:11, 9 May 2008 (UTC)
[change] George Müller
I've been working to make this article longer, I finished that. Will somebody look it over and fix it up a bit. Also see if you can find some more references (sort of lacking) -- AmericanEagle 03:41, 9 May 2008 (UTC)
[change] Charles Spurgeon
Took some time to simplify this one, but maybe some cleanup, it could be a featured article. -- AmericanEagle 07:21, 3 May 2008 (UTC)
- It could be featured, if some of his sermons had their own article. It can be a good article, however. A very good job of simplification. The English version is extremely long. Chenzw Talk 07:39, 3 May 2008 (UTC)
[change] Started in April and March 2008
[change] The Blue Man Group
I would like to see how my article skills are so I picked my favorite one to post here. Thanks! SwirlBoy39 (talk) 23:46, 1 March 2008 (UTC)
[change] General Certificate of Secondary Education
I just created this article, and as it's my first on Simple wiki I'm hoping someone more experienced here would look it over to see if anything needs changing to make it suitable, or to say if it's okay as is. --JulesN Talk 17:47, 26 April 2008 (UTC)
[change] Billy Graham
It probably could use some clean up, but that's why I put it on here. I will be working on it (with help, I hope) to bring this to a "Good" article status. Please check it out and make some edits, AmericanEagle 06:09, 24 April 2008 (UTC)
[change] Otter
Hello! I made an article at Otter, but I'm not sure if I made it right. Could someone look at it, and help improve it if it needs to be? I was kind of surprised when I found that there was no article on them.
- I changed a couple of sentences and put in a nice picture. I don't know if it's complete but it looks fairly good to me. Maybe if there are certain places many otters live it should be included. Put four of these "~" after you write something so as your name or IP is signed after. ~ R.T.G 18:36, 11 April 2008 (UTC)
[change] The Blue Man Group
I would like to see how my article skills are so I picked my favorite one to post here. Thanks! SwirlBoy39 (talk) 23:46, 1 March 2008 (UTC)
[change] Video game
This article is not far off good article. It just needs a few simplifys, a few POV removed (maybe?) and a couple of good external links. ~ R.T.G 23:57, 10 April 2008 (UTC)
[change] Valais and all related articles
Please tell me if I translated them enough into Simple English, and please also tell me if I did a good job on them as they are some of my first articles. -Razorflame 01:56, 29 November 2007 (UTC)
- I would think of changing the word "canton" to maybe "region called a canton" and simplifying the sentence "Fifty of the mountains are more than 4,000m high, with the highest, Monte Rosa, that reaches to 4,638m (15,217ft), and there are many glaciers." to "and the highest is xxx high. There are many glaciers in the region." And would say it is a Wikipedia:Very good articles. It does have a lot of red links though. ~ R.T.G 18:45, 11 April 2008 (UTC)
- Is there no page called Very good articles? ~ R.T.G 18:46, 11 April 2008 (UTC)
[change] Mali
Since the Mali article consisted only of "Mali is a country in Africa.", I thought I'd have a go at expanding it. However, lots of the links therein don't yet have articles. If anyone wants to make some of them, it would be much appreciated, as would feedback on the Mali article itself. Thank you. Jpbarrass 07:52, 1 November 2007 (UTC)
