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This article needs a clean up. It is very similar to Peter Kelamis bio on his home page. The grammar also needs to be fixed. I haven't been a wikipedian very long and i dont know very much about Peter Kelamis so i dont think i am quite up to editing the article myself. I propose that an experienced wikipedian with a knowledge of Peter Kelamis rewrite his bio or fix the grammar, change the wording to differentiate it from his homepage bio and spruce it up in general.--ISeeDeadPixels 00:35, 15 December 2006 (UTC)