Talk:Otmar Freiherr von Verschuer
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A few points that I have changed. -"Nazi" is not a nationality. It seems to be standard to mention a person's nationality in the first sentence, so I have changed it to "German". -Mengele was probably infamous, but that is probably not encyclopedic language. -What is "[sic]" about "collected eyes of different colour"? -Minor language and typo corrections.
- The [sic] was because of the British use of "colour" but I suppose it doesn't matter; I'm perfectly happy with the other changes. I think it is important to emphasize his ties with the Nazi regime but the added heading does that at least as well and without any style issues, so bravo. --Fastfission 15:54, 27 Jun 2004 (UTC)
