Talk:Northgate Information Solutions

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[edit] Moved notations of uncertainty to here; other edits

In the body of the article, there are a few places marked something like

(not sure that is correct; DE Jan 2007)

apparently by Delleray. Rather than adding comments to the actual article, these should be tagged with something like {{cn}}, and any discussion should go here on the talk page. I've made a couple of clean-ups and taggings.

In general, this reads a lot like a company newsletter. The excitement of events like the headquarters building consolidating from three to two floors, or the half-day dip and recovery in stock price on December 12, 2005, may be lost on many readers.

There's still quite a bit of POV here (e.g., "This may have been a step too far") which I haven't altered.

I wasn't sure what "psaring" was -- whether this was from an initialism such as PSAR that needed explanation, or a misspelling of "sparing" (which, if so, would also need clarification as to what it means in this context).

I removed all wikilinks to MDIS since it seems like they'd all resolve back to this article in any event. --NapoliRoma 19:34, 27 January 2007 (UTC)