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User talk:Nfrno Burns

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Hello Nfrno Burns. Welcome to Wikipedia! This is a website where everyone is welcomed to pitch in their own knowledge to just about anything in the world's most up-to-date encyclopedia.

The quick links to Wikipedia are on the left side of every page. Here're some links that you should take time reading them (don't worry, they're short and very easy to understand)

If you need help, simply go to Wikipedia:Questions or ask on my talk page. Last thing, don't forget to sign your name when you do edits on a talk page. Signing a page is as easy as typing four tildes (~~~~). I hope that your experience in Wikipedia will be a memorable one.
OhanaUnitedTalk page 01:36, 10 October 2007 (UTC)

Good work on your posting your "Green Fleets" paragraphs; however, for that page to stand on its own it needs a description of what green fleets are. What are they connected to?Mcwabaunsee 20:39, 18 October 2007 (UTC)


[edit] Green Fleets

"...to reduce carbon emissions,planting trees to guard the present, and promoting new technology to protect the future."

Keep an an eye out for parallel construction. Your verb forms need to be assimilated.

Good work on creating a concise introduction; however, in the first section of the article terms like "fleet vehicles" and "green fleet process," even the repeated use of "fleet," all remain abstract for the reader because the introduction is vague. It sounds somewhat like a mission statement. What are Green Fleets? The latter two sections, whose titles seem to overlap, begin to clear these questions up, but the definition of a "fleet," what it literally is, is needed up front. Mcwabaunsee 21:06, 15 November 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Mark Rey

This entry has some great qualities. The organization of the page could use some work--"Background" is a big category. Can you break it up? Employment? Government appointments? Projects he's created or backed? Mcwabaunsee 21:06, 15 November 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Grammar

Your grammatical corrections are too few, and many of the sentences (especially, for instance, the Kelly Rowlands example) need more attention.Mcwabaunsee 20:39, 18 October 2007 (UTC) Great work on getting back at copy editing! Mcwabaunsee 21:06, 15 November 2007 (UTC)


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