Talk:Murder of Jennifer Moore

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Contents 1 A New Jennifer Moore Page also discussing Nightlife Legislation 2 This Reference has its own Nightlife Legislation section 3 Quotations 4 Edits 5 See also section 6 Law & Order

[edit] A New Jennifer Moore Page also discussing Nightlife Legislation

I deleted the contents of my Sandbox. Will remove the tag as well.--MurderWatcher1 (talk) 00:46, 8 December 2007 (UTC)

[edit] This Reference has its own Nightlife Legislation section

If you will check on the Imette St. Guillen reference page, you will see an in-depth discussion of Nightlife Legislation. This page also contains material(s) which are separate for Jennifer Moore's murder case and should be seen in a somewhat different light. Specifically, topics such as underage drinking, fake IDs, and legislation in other areas are some of the differences between the two pages.--MurderWatcher1 (talk) 20:22, 11 December 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Quotations

This article feels more like a quote-farm. It would be best to trim the number of direct quotations and instead summarize the information in the article. Karanacs (talk) 17:49, 17 December 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Edits

I've tagged this article for clean up and excessive use of quotes, which are not encyclopedic. The article needs a lot more clean up work, to which I will return in the future. It's important to avoid making a page about a murder victim into a tribute page, thus I removed material discussing her family and their statements about her loss. AndToToToo (talk) 17:52, 29 January 2008 (UTC)

[edit] See also section

I have trimmed this. This is not vandalism. --70.109.223.188 (talk) 12:59, 3 April 2008 (UTC)

[edit] Law & Order

This sounds similar to the opening premise in Law & Order S18E10 episode, "Tango" aired 2008-02-27. See here: [1] [2] Worth mentioning? --ChrisRuvolo (t) 19:08, 16 April 2008 (UTC)