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More information about this article... The following comments have been left for this page: This article contains a lot of confirmed information regarding Kaori Iida. Much of this information spawns from Japanese television shows subtitled in English and because of such, there may be a lot of information that is missing. There is a widely accepted biography regarding her career in music, but her solo releases that are listed on this pages are very dry and could use more information than is available. The information that is available on her page is correct and includes dates and references to the correct people associated with it. I suggest this article recieve an A-grade. --Neshcom 20:13, 1 September 2006 (UTC) (edit)

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[edit] Kaori Iida or Iida Kaori

Arggh! Yuck! <Flame off> There is no one so vulnerable to lack of attention to WP:MOSBIO as a Japanese pop musician.
By viewing the first version, i found

A singer, Kaori Iida (飯田圭織: Iida Kaori) was born ...

and conclude (with the lower degree of certainty that suffices on the page where i'm working on her entry) that

1. Kaori is probably a given name, and
2. Iida is probably a surname.

That would mean the article violates MoS by referring via given name alone (in subsequent references) to a person who has a surname, in bio'g them.
Someone who (unlike me) has some knowledge of the subject, and thus more certainty, should fix that, and document it on this talk page and in their edit summary for the article, so it can be confidently and quickly fixed, the next time some editor objects to their best buddy being referred to by surname. Jerzy•t 18:23, 21 September 2006 (UTC)

Done as soon as I saw it (which unfortunately is almost half a year later). -- Tydus Arandor 04:44, 23 February 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Project Assessment

A nice long treatment, but the bio section could benefit from being transformed more completely into paragraph format, rather than the chronology bullet list that appears at the moment. LordAmeth 23:35, 16 October 2007 (UTC)