Talk:John Burr Williams
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...suggestions for improvement?
Fintor 10:06, 24 April 2007 (UTC)
First, I find the article rather good - close to perfect (that's why I rated it as B :)). Some areas for possible (limited) improvement:
- the bio is on the short side; from this - 4/10 deals with the publication of Theory..., and 62 years of his life (1927-1989) are covered very fast basically with "he managed investments, he taught and written"
- the theoretical contributions could perhaps benefit from more systematization (sub-sections?) and some more details
- some photo would be nice (if available)
Anyway, this is really good already and, if someone more knowledgeable thinks there is no more relevant info, change the class to A and maybe push for Good/Featured article. AdamSmithee 12:23, 24 April 2007 (UTC)