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[edit] Importance tag

Nothing in the article is supported by secondary sources. The two notes are just links to websites of projects mentioned in the article. Steve Dufour 16:34, 13 April 2007 (UTC)

fixed. :) --shift6 20:02, 3 May 2007 (UTC)

Thanks. I'm impressed. :-) Steve Dufour 03:39, 4 May 2007 (UTC)

Thanks for a job well done! --Tilman 16:13, 4 May 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Neutrality?

I added a POV tag in here. There are references to his Front Sight community in glowing terms, and the positive media coverage about its creation. There's a brief mention under a litigation section but without followup, e.g., [1] . The controversy and the subject should be in the same area, not separated throughout the article. Out-of-date descriptions used in the present tense by no one should not occupy several times the space of a legal settlement involving some $8 million, if I'm reading this article correctly. It seems much of the neutrality problem is from word choice and PR material, and the rest is from how facts are structured. Or maybe I'm wrong. --Thatnewguy (talk) 02:33, 4 June 2008 (UTC)