Talk:Guo Ziyi
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I edited the "Under Emperor Daizong and Tibetan Invasion" section for clarity and grammar. I think that other sections probably require such attention, but information from this section is the reason I came to this article. I cleaned up the sentence "Sun Tzu's idea of the cleanest kind of battle" as best as I could, but I left the phrase "Daizong appeared to him and stated, 'If the country had just use general earlier, this would never happen.' " alone, since I could not figure out what meaning it was trying to convey. (Captain Walker (talk) 06:47, 26 May 2008 (UTC))