Talk:Gheorghe Tătărescu

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Article milestones Date Process Result March 27, 2007 Good article nominee Listed November 11, 2007 WikiProject A-class review Not approved Current Status: Good article

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More information about this article... The following comments have been left for this page: i believe this to be a good article, and have nominated it as such. the article could benefit from having some sections rephrased (awkward clause structure indicates that much of the article may have been written by non-native english speakers) but there are few if any outright grammar errors. the article could also use some more pictures, although in every other technical regard (person infobox, references and inline citations, subsection structure) the article is excellent and well-maintained. --Sapphic 15:51, 5 March 2007 (UTC) (edit)

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[edit] GA on hold

I have assessed this article according to the GA criteria. Here are a few suggestions that need to be fixed before I'll pass the article.

1. In the lead "Elected an honorary member of the Romanian Academy in 1937 and removed from his seat by Communist authorities (1948),[1] he..." You use "in 1937" and then "(1948)"; to keep it uniform, switch to "by Communist authorities in 1948". Also, the lead can be expanded to better summarize the article (see WP:Lead).
2. A lot of text is included within parenthesis throughout the article. Consider just including some of it within the sentence or rewriting the statements themselves. For example the first sentence in the second paragraph in the European politics section is over five lines long. This statement should be broken into two statements and reworded. I'd recommend going through the article and removing at least half of these and rewording the statements.
3. In the European policies section, I'm not sure if fronteers is spelled wrong or not, please fix if necessary.
4. There are a few statements throughout the article that stand alone. Either incorporate them into another paragraph or expand upon them.
5. Go through the article and make sure to wikilink full dates (ex: November 26, 1940).
6. You mention that he died, but how?

Fix the above suggestions within seven days and I'll pass the article. If you have any questions or when you finish, let me know on my talk page and I'll get back to you as soon as I can. --Nehrams2020 00:44, 18 March 2007 (UTC)

You have resolved all of the issues listed above except for expanding the lead. Please improve it further and I'll pass the article. I'll give you two days to expand it, and if it's not expanded to at least two full paragraphs, I'll fail the article for now. The article looks very good overall, but just needs a good intro to lead into the article. --Nehrams2020 06:28, 26 March 2007 (UTC)

[edit] GA passed

Good job fixing everything I have suggested, and I have now passed this article as a GA according to the GA criteria. Continue to improve the article and make sure all newly added information is properly sourced. Keep up the good work and consider helping to review an article or two at GAC. We have a massive backlog! --Nehrams2020 17:16, 27 March 2007 (UTC)

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