Talk:Bakunyū
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[edit] Article Talk
This is Admeister200x here, I've created this article because I thought it was a shame that there was no dedicated page for this branch of Hentai, especially since the majority of the others are covered. I've written what I can for now, but I might add a few things later. - Admeister200x August 10th 2007
I've added some links to external pages, as well as a distinction between the Hentai branch of Bakunyuu and the real life one. To anyone who is reading this, feel free to add to the article if you can. - Admeister200x September 9th 2007.
[edit] Cleanup
Cleanup is needed here, primarily in terms of wikilinking and consolidation of the repetitive (redundant) statements of the intro and "main focus" section into a single logical narrative. Some simple grammatical and format changes also need to be made, such as italicizing hentai, wikilinking it, not capitalizing it, and representing its relation with bakunyū correctly. Bakunyū is an aspect or feature, or sub-genre, within the genre of hentai anime. LordAmeth 14:56, 3 November 2007 (UTC)
Thanks for the advice, I've edited the article accordingly. Admeister200x 22 November 2007