Talk:American Federation of State, County and Municipal Employees
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[edit] Neutrality
I believe the Campaigns section does not present an objective point of view, both in the references to positive accomplishments by AFSCME and the dispute between AFSCME and SEIU described at the end of the article. In this former case (AFSCME achievements), there are no sources cited, and the section reads like an advertisement. Citations should be provided to support the claims. On the other hand, the reference to Illinois workers who "soundly rejected" AFSCME sounds unobjective. A citation is provided, but a change in the language might help avoid the impression that a member of SEIU, a rival union to AFSCME, is posting negative comments.Deseavers 08:06, 3 January 2007 (UTC)
- I've cleaned it up a little and tried to keep it neutral, in addition to mentioning the "follow the work" policy.--Orange Mike 16:11, 9 February 2007 (UTC)
